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I HATE YOU YOUR SO TALENTED

I love you

Meow

I liked the animation... But that was fked up Chris hahahahha

Well, definately not top notch

But its definitely better than the first time I did a flash :)
The drawings weren't too bad, but it was choppy. I suggest putting the Frame rate to 24 (FPS), and putting more drawings in between movements.
Add sound. Doesn't matter if it's your first flash, sound always makes a difference.
I got the main idea, but some parts of this weren't clear, and had my questioning eye brow cocked up. Try to make it as clear as possible.

And yeah. Keep going! Practice makes perfect.

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I got pico

And I wanted to be Blockhead :( You should have included him haha
Good game though!

Eveyrthing was really well presented

..Except for the voice acting. I was especially dissapointed in the castle lord, i forgot his name haha :)
The text was questionable at times too..
But the rest is veryy well done :)

The voice acting was good, but its the quality im talking about. At times I just wanted to skip the whole thing, it ruined the wholre game a little :/

Work on the voices, and proofread!

herian4 responds:

I will see what can we do to improve the voice acting!
Best Wishes!

Hernan Lopez
Epic LLama Warchief

no...

Way too hard for n00bs to understand, and does not add anything to flashers,
bad quality, no originality, crap.

good luck with the rest.

MintPaw responds:

Well you can stick to your animation.

Yeah I'm uh.... of the slightly toasted complexion.... It's a nice color :)

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