SlightlyToasted's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Max Super- Escape from xD]

Hahahha

I like the ending when his face god xDed :)
You have to add some kind of music though, and coloring other things besides the huge smiley face would be nice.

Not bad though, your improving!

sirsamy145 responds:

thanks :)

[The Clown Downstairs]

Wow!

Incredible for your first flash, you already have the artwork down.. I'll be keeping my eye on you for future submissions.

I kinda wished there was something of a story.. But that's fine, you probably will make one in the future.. That flash was creepy :P
And I dislike clowns.

You got the capture of the creepy style~!

JohnDavidHeptinstall responds:

Thanks a lot - I was always racking my brains throughout the animation project on how I could achieve the creepiest effect - I'm glad some people found it so!

[Carl & the Blob]

It wasn't amazing

But we all start somewhere.
There was no animation though, it was all motion tween.. Even the blob.

So work on FBF (Frame by frame) and drawing better quality characters.

Quacko4 responds:

Thank you for the constructive criticism. I will try to follow through with your suggestions.

[max super introduction]

Well,

I can appreciate your enthusiasm on story telling, and your liking to invent your own characters and tell a story.. But the drawings.. haha as you refer yourself, "not much of a Picasso drawn". Your grammar could improve too, but that doesn't matter as much as the rest. As for the animation, I'm not gunna hate because it wasn't good, I assume you are a beginner on flash and just figuring things out, so I only encourage you to go on and do more.

Good luck with your future projects! And remember, practice makes perfect.

sirsamy145 responds:

wow thanks, i really apreciate it, and yeah i will practice more :)

[Moarphs: In and Out]

my eyes were glued to the screen..

It was so smooth... The whole thing just gave me such a warm feeling inside.. its magic

My fav was the duck :D

M-Shack responds:

If you liked the duck your going to love Moarphs 2

[Random Flipbook Animation]

Random indeed.

But still decent... I would stop it at the end so it doesn't repeat though.

PsychobillyClock responds:

You can't just stop a pimp walk with one cycle. If it didn't repeat you couldn't get the full flavor of its pimpitude.

[Sketched - Happy Birthday]

I love the sketched shorts...

And u didnt let me down. Good job soldier.

sirjeffofshort responds:

Thanks man. I'm glad we didn't disappoint. Haha.

[Snow Wars Introduction]

HI COREY

lol
I liked it, the text effects were cool at the beginning.
The comedy was a little bit corny, but I liked it a lot that way..
I was dissapointed when I first saw it wasn't a flash, but it ended up ok, the star wars gun effects and sounds made it have a little element of flash, though for some reason the lip sync was a little off, but nothing to scream about.
Good work :D

Fro responds:

You should of saw the lip syncing before I edited it for about a month.

The voices would still be playing now they were so off. O.o

Thanks for the review. :)

[OLD MOBS EP3]

Hip hip...

HOORAY!!! EPISODE 3! Once again you amazed me with your animation, once again, a little choppy sometimes, but still awesome. Tom Pulp. LMFAO!
And you have a nice little story going here, I cant wait to see even more.
Congratz, and thanks for making another one!!

tacobuttfish responds:

Thanks for watching our newest episode! And thanks even more for the good score! We'll see you again for Episode 4!

-Taco Buttfish.